Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 13, 2020
Descriptive Writing - Who is this?
For writing this week we have been toing discriptive writing.
This is my discriptive writing.
I'm very proud of it and it was so much fun to make!
Have you ever done a piece of discriptive writing?
5 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hey lass, I’d love to read it but there doesn’t seem to be anything there? Maybe try to post it again ?
ReplyDeleteOk I'll try to get that to work
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ReplyDeleteIs it the BFG? This book was one of my favourites when I was growing up- my copy of the book was so bartered and dog-eared because I read it so many times! It would be great to see you do some other really creative things around this character- maybe do a sketch of him- you are so good at drawing.
ReplyDeleteI’m looking forward to seeing more of your posts. :)
You got it correct! Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteI have that book also (as you already know!) It's one of my favrouite too.