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Tuesday, March 24, 2020

? Who is this person?

Kia Ora Bloggers,

Here is some work I have done for writing. We've been learning how to do descriptive writing. A good piece of descriptive writing has a lot of adjectives or adverbs but not too many or it sounds silly.



 Guess who I'm talking about. It is one of the teachers at school.

It's not finished yet though so...
Tell me who I'm talking about and how I could describe this person a bit more
in the comments below.

Thank you for reading my post.
Ka Kite see you next time!
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6 comments:

  1. Miss RobertsMarch 25, 2020 at 11:04 AM

    I would love to know who it is? But I can't see your writing, can you please post again?
    Thank you!
    Miss Roberts

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  2. AnonymousMarch 26, 2020 at 10:20 AM

    i love your post Izzy i dont know who it is.

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  3. Alun DaviesMarch 26, 2020 at 11:43 AM

    I think I know who it is! Maybe you could add something about her work, hobbies or favourite food?

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  4. Miss RobertsMarch 26, 2020 at 1:57 PM

    I think I know who it is as well... :-) I agree with your Dad though, a little more detail would really hook us in and make us think a bit more!

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