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Tuesday, March 16, 2021

Tsunami play with Holly, Amelia, Lucy and I

 Hello Bloggers!

For literacy this week we have had half an hour to do some freewriting each morning and Holly, Lucy, Amelia and I are working on a play together. It is just a draft so it is not finished yet.

This is our draft. Child 1 is Amelia, Child 2 is Lucy, Tsunami 1 is Amelia, Tsunami 2 is Amelia, Tsunami 3 is Amelia, and I am the narrator.


I think this is a pretty good draft for us as I have never written a play before.
Do you have any feedback for me? I will take them and use your feedback to make it better.
Ka Kite see you next time! 
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 16, 2021 at 2:27 PM

    Hey Izzy,
    I really enjoyed looking at all the great ideas you put down on the script.
    Next time could you add in all the props we are using?
    Great work! See ya soon!

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    1. AnonymousApril 13, 2021 at 2:01 PM

      Ok,
      Thanks for the feedback!
      Izzy ^_^

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  2. AnonymousMarch 19, 2021 at 10:21 AM

    cool

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